2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):最调皮的Tom

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Jan.16 Friday Cloudy When I went into my classroom this morning ,I found the class is all discussing about Tom.Tom is a naughty boy in our class and this morning he was said to break the window of the class.Some said he broke the window when he was playing football game after school and kicked ball to the window. Some said Tom broke the window for he was criticized by our Math teacher. I was not believing this.Tom and I are good friends, so I know him a lot. He is naughty but not bad. He played joke with students and boosted a lot.He was a school football player and he never did bad things to other. So I think the window is not broken by Tom.