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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Thank you for your concern about how Chinese students spend our spare time．I'm writing to tell you something about it． First of all，in our spare time after class，we read all kinds of books in the reading-room．In this way we learn a lot more in the library than in class especially in the field we are interested in．In addition，sports and games keep US healthy-and strong enough to deal with difficult situations．Among all games，volleyball is our favorite．After a long time of studying，doing sports is a good way of relaxing ourselves．Sometimes we go in for social activities together．For example，we go to plant trees in spring. Out-of-class activities can do a lot of good，not only to our study but also to our life．So what about American students' after-class activities，Peter? Write me soon．
