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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(19):回信

发布时间:2013-11-01 17:15浏览次数:379
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阅读下列短文,根据短文内容写一封回信。
Dear editor,
I’m a shy boy. I have trouble getting along with others, and thus I have very few friends at school. It’s ok since I live with my parents now. But next year, I’m going to college and I will be far away from my parents. So I want to make some new friends to spend the college life together. Would you please give me some advice on how to make friends with others?
Thanks.
Mike

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1. 信的开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数。

2. 词数100-120。


Dear Mike,
Thanks for your letter. Here’s my advice on ….


Angel
用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Thanks for your letter. Here’s my advice on how to make friends with others. First of all, show your friendly. You can make a friend by being nice and friendly. Smile works.Secondly, expand your social circle. Join a club. Try something you've never done before. Be bold! Most important of all is to listen and ask questions. Other people like to know they're being heard and that their ideas are appreciated. By being a good listener, you let others know that you value what they have to say and thus you get to know what kind of people they are. In this way, you’ll make friends with them.

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