2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(110):英语日记

希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是学术词汇的积累；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；可以适当增加副词的使用。

April 20, 2004 Tuesday Fine 　　 This morning, after I finished my homework, I decided to go to the cinema to see a film. I was about to arrive at the cinema when I found a foreigner standing on the side of the road, looking nervous. Then I came up to him to see what was the matter with him. However, neither of us could understand each other. As last we both made ourselves understood with the help of body language. The foreigner wanted to go to the People’s Park. I stopped a taxi and told the driver to drive the foreigner to the People’s Park . Then I want to the cinema and enjoyed myself there.