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Dear Ernesto and Stasi, I happened to have read your advertisement and have decided to apply for the job. I’m a student in Senior III. I’ve been very interested in English and intend to enter a foreign language college after I graduate from high school. I shall be free during the summer vacation. So I have decided to find something interesting to do and I think the job is the very thing I’d like to do. Though I won’t get pay for the job, it will give me some valuable job experience as well as the opportunity to practise my spoken English by acting as a translator for you. Besides, I’m so strong and healthy, and I really enjoy making friends and communicating with foreigners. I’d appreciate it if I’m offered the job. I’m sure I can be of great help to you. Looking forward to your early reply!
