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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Our Life in the Future With the rapid development of hi―tech，our life will change a lot in many ways in the future． We can do almost everything at home．For example，we can log on line to read newspapers，pay telephone bills，do shopping and even see a doctor at home．To protect the environment，all cars will be powered by electricity，solar energy or wind so that we will have a tidy and green world． What’S more，people can travel in space．It will be very easy for us to visit other stars。such as the moon and the Mars．Almost any disease can be cured and people can enjoy a healthier and longer life． All this can come true，I think，through our efforts．In the future ,our life will become better and better.
