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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear Manager, I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema. First, the film was delayed as there were so many advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoying. Second, the sound of the film was so loud that I could hardly bear it. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terrible should happen, it would be difficult for people to get out quickly. As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I’m writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make more improvements.
