作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文章层次较为清晰;能够使用一些不错的从句。
My favorite sport is play soccer.When I was young,my father took me to his school to exercise.My father was a middle school teacher,he liked sporting,I saw he play soccer on the playground with other teacher,I felt very subtle.God was kind,I met a soccer on the way home by chance.I took it home and play it with friends every day,then I fell in love with playing soccer. From then on,I often practice playing with friends,I can always feel happy in practice,It gives me much power,I make much progress in it,I believe I can do better! I want to be a professional football player,like David Beckham,who my idol is.