高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；复杂句采用很棒；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Welcome to my home land，i am happy to hear that you will come to China to enjoy The Mid Autumn Festival with your family. The Mid Autumn Festival has long history，it is Chinese unique festival，on Mid Autumn Festival，every family will celebrate festival together，enjoy fun of reunite. And on Mid Autumn Festival we will eat a kind of traditional delicious food we called it moon cake.After a happy mail，all the family will enjoy beauty of moon，on Mid Autumn Festival night，moon will get more round，more bright and bigger. In the sky，moon moves，on the land，people talk and laugh，what is a harmonious and beautiful scene！ So，the night of the Mid Autumn Festival is wonderful，you can not miss it，enjoy it with your family。 Have a great time！