高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

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Dear friend: Welcome to China!The Middle Moon Festival is coming,and you can spend the festival in China.Then let me tell you something about it. First,Middle Moon Festival has a long history.Legend is in order to commemorate chang e.It is Chinese traditional festivals, for lunar calendar in August 15.On that day,all family return home and a family reunion.Family have dinner and eat the moon cake together.The moon in the sky is full round and very shine.It stand for the whole family enjoy happiness,so whole family can enjoy moon at night.The feeling is subtle,and I think you will like it. Your friend Li Hua