七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up at 6:00 o'clock yesterday. Then he went to the park by bike, and he had a good time in the park. He had lunch with his parents in McDonald 's. Sam played basketball with his classmate at 4 o'clock till 6 o'clock in the afternoon in the school ! Sam went for a walk with his father after dinner!, his father bought a classical CD to him .What a funny day Sam had!