拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者可适当增加词汇的丰富度,部分句子有错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
China is an ancient civilizations.We should be polite to everyone because we are Chinese. Civilization play a important role in international communication.It represents the image of a country. But modern Chinese don't think highly of civilization as past. I often see somebody spit anywhere in public,throw waste everywhere,destroy some works even relics.Chinese should do these?Of course not. It's necessary for everyone to improve qualities.If we behave something polite at friends' home we will get more high praise.If we behave something good at international communication our country will get more high praise.So improve our qualities is necessary.