高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport is playing soccer.When I was young,my father took me to his school .My father was a middle school teacher,and he liked sporting.I saw he play soccer on the playground with other teachers,and I felt subtle.God was kind that he let me meet one on the way home by chance.I took it home and play it with friends every day,then I was interested in playing soccer. From then on,I often practice playing soccer with friends,and I can always feel happy in the practice.It gives me much power,I make much progress in it,and I believe I can do better! I want to be a professional football player like David Beckham.He is my icon.