初中英语命题作文真题演练(69):长大后

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I have an idol.His name is Vae.He is a famous singer.He is honoured as"The fifth largest wit of Jiangnan"and"Music genius".I love him very much.I am influenced by what I constantly sees and hears，so I want to be a singer. My sound is sweet,but not stand out.I think I can practice in my home.I like to sing some songs in the toilet.I also like singing happily in a loud voice alone. I not any feel happy but also full with happiness. I am a good student,and my Chinese is good,so I can write good songs.I believe I will be a good singer!