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China is a state of ceremonies .Chinese should be polite to everyone, because civilization play a important role in international communication.It represents the image of a country. But modern Chinese don't think highly of civilization like once upon a time. I often see somebody spit anywhere in public.A lot of people throw waste everywhere.Children destroy some works even relics but nobody ask them to stop.Should Chinese do these?Of course not. It's necessary for everyone to improve qualities.If we behave something polite at friends' home we will get more high praise.If we behave something good at international communication our country will get more high praise.So improve our qualities is necessary.