高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

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Welcome to China!The Mid-Autumn festival is coming.This is an interesting festival.Then let me tell you something about it. The Mid-Autumn festival has a long history.It is Chinese traditional festivals, for lunar calendar in August 15.On that day,all family return home and reunion.Family have dinner and eat the moon cake together.The moon in the sky is full round and very shine.Just like the whole family enjoy happiness,so whole family like enjoying moon at night.Almost all the Chinese people like the festival,and I think you will like it,too.