小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

We have a new teacher in this year. He had just gratued from university. He is a bright boy. He teach math for us. He like wearing blue jeans and white shirt. We are intresting in his class, so our math have a good step. Our classmates like him. He has became our friend.