小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

We have a new teacher in this year. He had just graduated from university. He is a bright boy. He teaches math for us. He likes wearing blue jeans and white shirt. We are interested in his class, so our math have a good step. Our classmates like him. He has become our friend.