2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(12):Making Every Day Earth Day

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Making Every Day Earth Day The city is becoming more and more serious。Water is destroyed. A large number of trees have been cut down. Cause the earth to reduce life expectancy. Now, Earth Day is on April 22nd.And on that day people save water and electricity· plant trees and pick up the litter on the ground and so on。 But this day will make our lives better。I think this day can't. The earth's aging faster and we should make Every Day Earth Day。 We only love the earth every day and take care of the earth, the earth will be more beautiful。 Now，Let us take action to make the earth more beautiful。