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某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”，现向癸未征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。
作者词汇量偏少，也有些单词拼写错误；作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构不严谨；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
I want to Smile I think smile is one of most of our advantage。A smile is the most beautiful language。A smile can make other people smile。 I will smile at parents。Because they can learn about my happy and they will as well as me。In daily，they very hard so we shouldn't show our sorrow。It can make parents relax if we smile at them。We smile to let parents worry less about us。 I want to smile at me.Smile to yourself can make us more confident。It can make ourselves happy。The most important is not my enemy is my friend。 I want to smile at anyone。
