作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文中衔接词丰富;能够使用一些简单的从句。
Dear redactor, World is changing quickly.It is a general thing to possess one or more cars. Car takes convenient to people,like it can save our valuable time,not only it,but also we can drive car to anywhere we want to visit.It comfortable for travel,and more safe than take bicycle. Every thing has its own shortcoming,include cars,more and more cars were produced,and they take pollution with themselves,so cause environment get bad.The healthy of people will get more and more bad,too,because of the bad environment,the bad not only this,cars can be cause traffic jams and traffic accidents. So,it is time to give my advises,i think government should control the number of cars to keep that we have a clean and quiet environment. ——Lili