2. 参考词汇:
replenish 补充nutritious有营养的
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Adolescent diet hobbies vary,someone like to drink beverage,someone like to eat fruits.Now let us discuss the topic of conversation about “Drinks or fruit , which do you prefer?” Someone like beverage,they think it more delicious than water,and it can replenish energy.It is satisfy both sides. Someone like fruits,they think fruits are rich in nutrition,and fruits also can replenish vitamin.Not only those advantages,but also fruits can mprove one's looks.I think the last reason cause the reuse that girl love fruits. I think fruits and beverage each has its own merits,but i prefer fruits,the important reason is that fruits not only can quench my thirst,but also them can let me go out of hungry.