作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
An Ideal Teacher An ideal teacher must be enthusiastic.He should be good at his subject,an take pride in his work.He should be a little bit of an actor,and he should not be afraid of showing his feelings and expressing his ideas. He must like his students and respect them.He should have all understanding of his students and be able to relate to them.He should regard his students as individuals and acknowledge their differences.He must know how to encourage self-development and the growth of each student. All in all,an ideal teacher is one who is kind,encouraging and helpful to his students.He grows,learns and improve himself along with his students.