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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(59):An Ideal Teacher

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要求:
作为高三的学生,在12年的求学生涯中,遇到过许许多多的老师。有人认为理想的老师应该工作热情,学识丰富,待人友善,细心耐心;还有人认为理想的老师能理解学生。谈吐幽默,永远鼓励学生,支持学生不断上进。
请你以“An Ideal Teacher”为题,写一篇作文,谈一谈你理想中的老师。词数不少于100。
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作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。

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An Ideal Teacher An ideal teacher must be enthusiastic.He should be good at his subject,an take pride in his work.He should be a little bit of an actor,and he should not be afraid of showing his feelings and expressing his ideas. He must like his students and respect them.He should have all understanding of his students and be able to relate to them.He should regard his students as individuals and acknowledge their differences.He must know how to encourage self-development and the growth of each student. All in all,an ideal teacher is one who is kind,encouraging and helpful to his students.He grows,learns and improve himself along with his students.

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