高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒。

I am happy to introduce Nanjing to you，you will know about this city clearly by us. Nanjing is seated the southeastern of China,it is the provincial capital of Jiangsu province.it has large population，about five million. Nanjing has long history,early in the 2400 years before，the first dynasty of China was found.from then on，until 2400 years，10 dynasties in all were found in Nanjing. Because of his long history，Nanjing was beautiful and classical beauty,there are many Places of historic interest and scenic beauty，like Xuanwu Lake，Jiming temple and so on.Not only there were Places of historic interest and scenic beauty，but also there are many modern factories and tall and big buildings. So，if you come to Nanjing，you should visit modern buildings and Places of historic interest and scenic beauty. Everyone，have a good time！