2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

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lt is well know that environment has become a serious problem.Animals and plans are important to the earth.They can balance the pollution.Everything should be in a balance state.Or it will be disorder.But if something happened,we can solve it,or ingore it.As a result,either better or worse.If someone ask me to choose one.I am surely choose to solve it.A drop of water is not enough for a person,but hunderds of it is huge.It can improve .