注意:
1. 信的开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数。
2. 词数100-120。
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear Mike, i had received your letter. i will give you some advice on how to make friends with others. Firstly, smile and be friendly. You can make a friend by being nice and friendly. Remember to smile when you walk by people. A smile can warm up others. Secondly, expand your social circle. Join a school club or a club outside school. Try something you've never done before. Be bold! Most important of all is to listen and ask questions. Other people like to know they're being heard and that their ideas are appreciated. By being a good listener, you let others know that you value what they have to say and thus you get to know what kind of people they are. In this way, you’ll make friends with them. Best wishes. Angel