参考词汇:
传统美德:traditional moral value
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Parents is all of our world.No they,no us.So we have to respecting parents. Respecting parents programme Showing respect to parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral values. As most of the students today are “the only child” in the family, they only think of themselves, without caring much about their parents. Our school started a programme several weeks ago. It’s “Respecting parents programme”. They worked out ten rules and put forward some practical suggestions. For example: Remember your parents’ birthdays and express your good wishes to them; say “hello” to them when you come back home and tell your parents where you will go and when you leave. So far, the programme has been very successful and has been highly praised by parents.