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Sam got up at 6 AM yesterday. Then he ride to the park and had a very good time there. Sam had his lunch with his parents at Mcdonald's. And in the afternoon, he played basketball with his classmates from 4 PM to 6 PM. After dinner, sam went for a walk with his father. And his father bought him a CD of classic music. What a wonderful day of Sam!