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2007年6月英语六级作文真题:学雷锋

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:47浏览次数:1094
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Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed 
1.有的人认为应该有回报 
2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报 
3.我的看法 
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Should one except a reward when doing a good deed Nowadays, a heated debated about a reward is under way in china. Some people believe that one should except a reward when doing a good deed, whereas others argue that one should not except a reward. These reasons are not far to seek. First of all, the people can express their emotion to the heat-heart. Further more, this good deed can be encouraged by a reward. In most time, most people are educationed by this deed. At the same time, the people should not except a reward before doing a good deed. This is why some people hold the attitude that one should not except a reward when doing a good deed. Though they have different atttudes to it, they eager to encourage more good deeds. As far as i am concerned, they are all right. We should strike a bablance between them. The rewards are not necessary, but this is not our intention.

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