小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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I'v never thought what should I to be When I grew up.but now ,I really need to think about it.I want to be a rich that lead a free life,or a politician present with all respect.many times,I feared that it would be very hard to reach because of uncertainty deep in my heart. but now,I have made my final decision that I mut to be a layer,then a entrepreneur and then a politician.that's what I want to,and I hope someday everything became true.