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考研作文:人脑和电脑的不同

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:18浏览次数:3132
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写一篇关于电脑和人脑差别的文章。

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300字以内。

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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文章层次较为清晰。

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In present years, people are conscious that it is important to develop quality oriented education,During past tens years, people pay more attention to the score of test.By that kind of education,students have to do lots of exercise for high scores,and majority of them don't understand the theory.They lose the right to pursue the things which they are interested in. Today many people accepted the idea"high score doesn't mean high capable". Some measure have been taken for transforming the education. There are many differences between test-oriented education and quality-oriented education. The most distinguish character of quality-oriented education is that which encourage students to learn knowledge for interest but not for scores. With the development of society, the creativity become more and more important not only for individuals but also for a country. If we want to become successful person,we must master a skill. It is well known for us that "interesting is the best teacher",so it is important to know what we like and what things we want to do ,but not how to get high score.Quality -oriented education provide the chance for everyone to choose what kind of man you want to be depending on interesting. From the view of my point that we should do two things for quality-oriented education as follows:At first place,dividing students by scores should be eliminated,only by this way,students can discard the pursue for high scores.At the second place, teachers should enlighten students to solve problem by themselves,but not tell them what should be done and what should not.Only by this way,the future generations will become creativity and can get great achievement in the future.

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