七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，注意文中少数拼写错误；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up six o'clock in the morning yesterday, then ride bike to park, he played very happy in the park. He had lunch in the McDonald's with his parent. In the afternoon, sam played basketball in school with his classmate from 4 o'clock tll 6 o'clock. After dinner, sam and his father went for a walk together, his father bought a classical music CD to he. How interesting a day!