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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段。
I'm a junior high school student.My name is Ivy,I am 12 years old.I am cheerful everyday,because I can meet great things everyday.My favourite subjects are English,and history as well.At school,the teacher is very friendly and students are very helpful,I like my class,I like my school! There are four people in my family.They are my parents,my elder brother and me.Everyday,my parents go to work,my brother studies at his school hard,I am hard- working,too.
