七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

请作者增加词汇丰富度；作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam get up at 6:00 in yesterday.then he go to park by bike,he have a good time in park.he and parents eat lunch in the McDonald’s. In the afternoon, Sam and her classmate play basketball at school,Since the 4:00 p.m till 6:00 p.m.after eat dinner,Sam and farther go for a walk ,my farther buy a piece of the classical music CD.Sam have a fun day.