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2012年7月7日雅思大作文真题:广告对消费者的影响

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:53浏览次数:3958
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【题目要求

Advertising encourage people to buy in quantity rather than promoting its quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【题目分析

老题。广告出题种类两种,一种为大范围的(易写),如广告的好与坏;一种为考察细节的(难写),如来自竞争公司的广告对消费者的影响,而此次考试属于后者。所以大家要加强审题练习。
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正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,advertisment are around people's life.Something we use have great reputation.They have mouth advertisment,and have good quality.For different people have different use.For retailers,they want to sell more product.For customers,they have a high require on products.But not all products have good quality.Quantity and quality are the most factors for a product.Prices and market also important for goods.But honest is vital important for retailer,if they are dishonest,people will disappointed on their products.Noone will buy them.And the company finally go broke.So if a company play a role on costomers,the effect is self-evident.And more and more people know about the product,naturally it can circulate through people.If a product is bad,it just like to drink something bitter.Good advertisment environment need both of the customers and retailers trust.

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