单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;文中从句过少;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Dear Mr.Johnson Hello! We have received 3000 products from your company in 22nd,december.But according to our signing of the No.35 order,the exact number of the product is 3500.The other 500 products are still not received.So please check your product list and we are looking forward to your early reply.Thank you! Best wishes to you! yours Wang Haiyang 2008-12-23