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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少。
Good morning! It is really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview; I hope I can make a good performance today. I'm confident that I can succeed. I would like to talk about you about my life rules. Every mourning I get up at 6:00.Then I wash my face and eat meals hurry prematurely.I go to school at 6:15.When I leave my house,my mother always says:"Do not eat outside,it is bad for your health.Do not listen to music on school day.It is bad for your study.Do not watch TV on school nights.It is bad for your eyes."We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon.I back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening. When I go back home at night,I do my homework by myself every night, and it takes me four hours to finish it.We have too much homework and I always feel sleepy. But I think studying is an interesting thing,I can learn in it.
