七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam got up in six yesterday,then he go to the park by bicycle and have fun.in the noon,he and his father have a eating in McDonald's.Afternoon,he played basketball with his classmates.Sam go for a walk with his father and his father buy a classical CD after dinner.It is a good day for sam.