七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

建议作者增加过程性词汇的使用；复杂句使用不错，但句法错误偏多；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up six clock yestarday and then he ride bike went to park,he played very happy in the park,Sam and he paretns got eat Mcdonald's in the noon.Sam and his schoolmate play basket ball four PM till six PM in the school ,after had supper Sam and his father go for a walk ,his father bought music CD send to he