2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Success is the best thing which everyone wants to get it.But how can we succeed is a tough topic.Few of people could give an answer,include myself. Here are several opinions of mine to be successful. First of all, I think that a strong will is the important assurance to succeed. Secondly,only a man with a strong and unmovable will can accomplish the great mission. Because too many distractions effect us to get success.Even lead us to the stray.The further wrong path we are in the little chance we can succeed.At last , As the same to be a student,no one can be a useful man without study hard . All the things in a word,nothing succeeds without a strong will,to enjoy the way to success.