2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays online shopping was embraced by more and more people. People like shopping on line because of its convenience and time saving as well. Most online shopping website provide all kinds of product with colorful picture and visualized display mode. They can also get same experience as in real shopping. But Online shopping has some problems, like fake product, and fishing website, some people were frustrated by these bad experience. My suggestion is select several suppliers and compare their price, and customer feedback before paying the money. And choose those website with good reputation as well.