七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中拼写错误比较多，同时请注意积累词汇量；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

A happy day Sam gets up at 6:00 ,then goes to park by bike and plays excited.He has lunch at maidanglao with his parents and he plays basketball with his classmates from 4:00 to 6:00 .Sam goes for a walk after wancan . his father buys a classical music CD for him.Sam leads a happy day .