七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；作者词汇量偏少，不过单词拼写方面做的不错；衔接词较为不错，但文章结构不严谨；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam got up at 6 o'clock yesterday. Then he rode to the park, where he had a good time.At the noon, he ate the lunch with his parents in McDonald’s. in the afternoon, Sam as well as his classmates played basketball from 4 p.m till 6 p.m. After dinner,Sam went for a walk together with his father and his father bought a CD of classic music for him.what an intereting day for Sam!