2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；复杂句采用很棒；请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写，学术词汇的希望能更熟练一些请注意分段。

Recently I found that more and more products were excessive packaging, such as moon cakes, wines and etc. As the rapid economic growth in China, and we may have many selections if buy some thing, how to attact consumer? Those smart sellers choosed beautiful packaging and made their own product more attractive and unique. I think it is acceptable of proper packaging, but excessive packaging will be a big waste, and consumers will spend time to handle the packaging after using the product.