高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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Nanjing is capital of Jiangsu Province, which located in southeast of China, and it have five millions of population. Nanjing is historical city which was built almost 2,400 years ago, and it had been chosen to be capital by ten dynasties before. Nanjing is beautiful city with many scenic spots, like Xuanwu Lake, Jiming Temple, stone city etc, and also it have a lot of modern factories and tall buildings.