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Hello,my name is Lucy,Lucy King.Iam 13 years old.I come from the UK.I love Chinses very much .I want to known Chinses culture so I want to find a pen pal.I hope you are girl.My hobbies are sports,music,movies.I hope we can get together well .I speak Englishi.I can learn you how to study it.