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My name is Lucy and family name is Lucy King.I am a 13-year-old girl.I come from the UK that it is a beautiful country .At the age of five my morther told me plenty of chinese culture first. From then on I began to pay more attention it.I find China is a long history country .There are pently of places of interest such as the Great Wall,the Palace Museum and so on.These are so attractive that I would like to arrive China. Beside,I have a lot of habbies such as sports, music, movies.At present, I join music chub.My father says it not only develop my art talence,but also communicat with each other.Do you agree with me? I hope we become good friends.I also tell you my country about interesting things.We can communicate with ourselves.I hope you will come my town in future .I look forward to your letter.
