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My name is Lucy and family name is Lucy King.I am a 13-year-old girl.I come from the UK that it is a beautiful country.At the age of five my mother told me plenty of chinese culture first. From then on I were interested in chinese and began to pay more attention it.I find China is a history nation.There are lots of places of interest such as the Great Wall,the Palace Museum and so on.These are so attractive that I would like to arrive in China. Besides,I have a lot of hobbies such as sports, music, movies.At present, I join in the music chub.My father says it not only develop my art talent,but also communicate with each other.Do you agree with me? I hope we become good friends.I also tell you my country about interesting things.We can communicate with ourselves.I hope you will come my country in future.I look forward to your letter.
