高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Nanjing. It's my pleasure to introduce this beautiful city to you all. Nanjing, capacital of Jiansu province, lies in the southeast of China, it have a poplulation of 5 million. Nanjing is an old city with more than 2400 years history, and it was once the capital of ten dynasties. So, of course, Nanjing is a very beautiful city because it have many famous scenic spots, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple, The Stone city etc, there also have many modern facotries and high buildings.