邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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How to improve school safety Since 2010, several campus violence happened, which shocked all the country, and caused a deep think in the socity: How can we prevent the campus violence and protect students from hurt. However, the normal security methods should be strengthened. Firstly, the identity distinguish should be strengthened to make sure no stranger can get into the campus without permision. Secendly, there should be security guards huanging around the campus, sepecaily during the night. At last, the security education of students should be strengthened too. For our students, the most important thing to do is to be awere of how to protect ourslef and how to keep away from dangerous.